Stories from an eclectic mind
Romance, Fantasy and random short stories
Outside the Gorge
The Chasm deep and dark
The coolness hidden in it’s depths
Tries in vain to equalise
From the heat outside the Gorge
A footstep echos on stony bottom
A drip and algae
A fern clings to fragile existance
Hiding from the desert outside the Gorge
The sun it wins no battles
To light the bottom and the way
At most perpetual twilight
Preventing the mirages outside the Gorge
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BEAUTIFUL! I love the visuals. Thank you very much.
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It’s based on my memory of a place called Stanley Chasm in Central Australia. Thanks for the feedback.
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Very descriptive!
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Thank you. That’s what I was aiming for so it is great to get feedback to say that I managed it 🙂
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yes…the contrast between the coolness inside, and the heat outside I can feel it. 🙂
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